[wp-docs] Wordsmiths...

[Dougal Campbell]

Matt Mullenweg wrote:

> If anyone could take a look at these pages and check for typos or 
> awkward language that'd be very helpful. The better we communicate the 
> more people we'll reach.

Overall, I like the idea of the big buttons on the download page, but I 
feel like they over-dominate the page. The main problem (to me) is that 
the "Download WordPress 1.2 'Mingus'" header gets lost. Also, we could 
probably use some verbiage that more clearly states that this is the 
"production" or "release" version, and maybe get better separation of 
the sections about Unstable and Bleeding Edge.

We probably need to add some sort of official "privacy policy" somewhere 
on the site that explicitly states that we won't share private info, 
etc, etc.

I've attached revised versions of the HTML and CSS. Sorry I didn't do it 
as a diff. If you want, I can do that later when I have more time.

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